Saturday, April 28, 2012

Patients is a virtue part two....

Carmen let loud moans escape  from her mouth as they muffled every so often when she would let  her vanish into his neck. Safaree  placed Carmen on the couch. On all fours he entered her from the back pulling her hair and stroking harder. He felt her walls tighten which meant she was close but he wasn't going to allow her to come it was out of the question. Safaree stroked harder to get her closer to here climax and as soon as she spoke the words he was waiting for he pulled out. He stroked him self while she begged him for more. He entered her again with a slower stroke.

"Please gali faster." She cried out.

"No." He simply said continuing with his stroke. She began to throw it back the way she wanted it and once he caught on to what she was doing he pulled out again.

"Gali OK please I'll be good. Just stop teasing me I want to come now."

Safaree entered again for what would be the last time because he was ready to come too. His strokes were long and deep.

"Gali I'm... I'm about to... FUCK I'm about to come." She said grabbing for a pillow as both of them reached their climax.

They both took a deep gasp for air falling back on the couch.

Munstadshonika.... <3

21 comments:

  1. Wooww Carmen is outta control and she thought she was running things but found out she don't run shit lmao.Great Job!

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  2. Ummm *changes panties* OMGGGG lik this chapter and the one before .lik yassssss..... ANYWAYS where DF did this come from like wut??!! Came out of no where making niggas horny.. FOH! I have no suggestions this story is perfect!!! Plz post soon lik really tho post soon.

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  3. They nosty. Carmen is a FREAK! Loved it. Safaree put it doowwnn! Great job

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  4. Woah o_0 they DIRTY! lmao Safaree teasing Carmen, letting her know who's in charge! Good chapter, post soon!

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  5. Omg Carmen son yesss!! and i love the Safaree'a Dominance yo...kerp it up!

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  6. Carmen is NOSTY, and I love it lmao!!! I have a feeling there will be a lot of role playing, let le games begin :)

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  7. Lawd a mercy ... Galilee was like Carmen gon learn today! Lol
    Carmen a freak lol she lying tho she not gonna be good only for a lil bit then gogo back to not listening lol

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  8. Omg . Omg . Omg . Carmen is nosty . Nosty nosty nosty .

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  9. Lmaooo dead at everyone saying she "Nosty" but OH MY HOT DAMN if this shit didn't make u horny like u can't be human! This chapter nd the last were full of LUST and it is FREAKING AMAZING like I can't explain how I feel about this story @ first I was like where did the get this sex alter ego carmen from but then I realised tht nick said carmen comes out sometimes in the old angela yee interview lip service ! #ONIKAFAREE IS THE FUCK TRUTH I was so desperate to read this I started to read it on my small ass blackberry screen -_- #pressed but PLZ POST SOON PLZ. -@onika_nickistan

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  10. Lmaooooooooooooooo wait, I must really be some type of freak cuz I'm liking this entirely too much smh! WHOA!

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  11. SWEET GEEZUS! Carmen is a FREAK! Is it bad that loved every last bit of it? Lmfao great post

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  12. WOW AYYYYYYYYYYYE SB Had carmen beggging for it!!!!! freaks ^_^ :) i love it

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  13. 0_0 damn gali put in work.... He showed her whose boss *fans self* is it hot in here??? Btw Carmen is mad nosty

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  14. I love how Safaree be in charge..he have her begging for it..Carmen WOAH!! Oh no I don't think Im ready..and this is just the beggining..I'm trying to guess who wrote this one...so far Iove it..just that Idk what to expect..like it's not predictable but that's good

    -POST SOON

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  15. Good lawd!! *daps Carmen* My girl! Supa Freaks!!! And this is just the beginning yo! Gali was NOT lettin her be in control!! Man I love it!! ^.^

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  16. DAMN GALI! THIS SHIT IS TO FREAKING GOOD *reads next chap*

    ~@NickiMmemphis

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  17. Yeesssssss !! .. Carmen is wild .. Gali play to much that kind stuff get you slapped n scratched during sex lmaooo .. But good first sex scene i can only imagine whats next !!!

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  18. Yesss Carmen Is A NOSTY Gurl ... Me loves it ! *reads next chapter*

    -@Adores_1nicki

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  19. Ayeeeeeee mah nicca gali was showing Nic whose bawse! He put in work! He was wrong for teasing her though. Lol like what woman wanna be teased?! I don't. Give me the ZICK! anyway they POPPIN! Carmen a clown lol ya digg?!! Mah nicca. *sings Usher's "Climax"* I'm glad they both got to that point! *reads on*
    -@MinajFanDetroit

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